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Im Me - BabyK
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Im Me - BabyK
by babyk Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:39 pm
From time to time,
From lie to lie.
It's the story of my life,
Feels like getting stabbed by a knife.
It hurts when you tell me 'I'm a mistake',
Makes me want to give up and get baked.
But I want to keep you proud,
No matter what it takes,
I will push through the crowd,
Through as many fakes as it takes.
You drive me crazy from time to time,
But never crazy enough to cause a crime.
I will never be that daughter you always wanted,
So take me as I am and flaunt it!
From the lies you say,
Day by day.
From the tears that fell,
That held me tight in a small crowded shell.
There's something that makes me want to stay,
Imma lay it out like cookies on a cookie tray.
............
I love you ma',
Thats all i gotta say.
From lie to lie.
It's the story of my life,
Feels like getting stabbed by a knife.
It hurts when you tell me 'I'm a mistake',
Makes me want to give up and get baked.
But I want to keep you proud,
No matter what it takes,
I will push through the crowd,
Through as many fakes as it takes.
You drive me crazy from time to time,
But never crazy enough to cause a crime.
I will never be that daughter you always wanted,
So take me as I am and flaunt it!
From the lies you say,
Day by day.
From the tears that fell,
That held me tight in a small crowded shell.
There's something that makes me want to stay,
Imma lay it out like cookies on a cookie tray.
............
I love you ma',
Thats all i gotta say.
babyk- Up and Comming
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Re: Im Me - BabyK
by Smokahontas Fri Jan 09, 2009 11:17 pm
Niece.....this was good...........REAL GOOD....ur expessing ur feelins although not the greatest u did it wit no harshness in ur heart............did u let ur moms read this?
u should.............she'd be proud of her babygirl..................... I AM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVE YA MAMA
u should.............she'd be proud of her babygirl..................... I AM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVE YA MAMA
Smokahontas- Unheard Hype Staff
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Re: Im Me - BabyK
by Guest Tue Jan 13, 2009 2:06 am
[b]nice poem..... sorry ta scare ya outta tha chat box but no-1 needz ta be callin my man daddy but me!!!! sorry i mean no harm or hate just protective of whatz mine. ya feel me? but you are a good writer so def. keep up da good work & stay active. your mad young & have mad potential keep do'n ya thing ma[/b] 
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